Critique

At the beginning the position of the logo moves 2px to the left, For this one, I just readjusted my positioning and shaped the logo to be the appropriate size

Screen Recording 2026-09-25 at 20.11.42.mov

For the zero sugar bit, have it type on and not drawn on. I just did that below:

Screen Recording 2026-09-25 at 20.05.36.mov

Here is the final video:

Coke Zero Combined_1.mp4

Overall, I think I could of done a lot better, Hopefully this next assignment now, will be one where I could push it.

Assignment 2: Animated Poster

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Our second assignment is to create an animated poster for a festival, I was immediately excited by this one as music and design always work so well together, for this poster I think I want to focus on camp flog, as it appeals to a vision I have, I want to do an MF DOOM style poster, similar to his music video all-caps:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gSJeHDlhYls&list=RDgSJeHDlhYls&start_radio=1

For research, I looked at comic book covers, MF doom posters and art etc.

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This is the general aesthetic I want to go for when making this motion poster, With that, I did a few sketches

Honestly, I like most of these concepts, But the strongest ones to me is the Playing the SP-404, I think for that one, it’ll show the character pressing the sp-404, and with each button press it shows the featured artists.

The wheel spinning off is fun, and would fit the brands design, as well as the campfire revealing featured artists. I think a fun idea for that one would be a lightning strike flash reveals a bear near the trees.

See you again, is a strong one as well referencing Tyler who runs the event, maybe it could be a sun set, showing that era is well over. I don’t know!

I asked some class mates what they thought was the strongest and the majority said: campfire…

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I started work Immediately, this will be drawn out in a comic style, but I wanted a rough idea of what it should look like, so I did a VERY rough draft on photoshop:

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I just wanted to see if the idea would work, see what sort of layout I’m dealing with, I’ve never done an animated poster, nor have I ever made a 1920x1080 poster vertical… So I really wanted to see what I’m working with. I wanted to see the concept and write down what could be motioned.