We got the chance to submit our work for feedback and in this document were the comments made and the feedback taken in effect, I didn’t get too much but I what I did get will help with my project a lot, The main thing was timing, make things quicker essentially. Here it is

The notification runs a little slow, and move it to the right as it blocks and distracts

Kyle said the the toast message was good but it was a bit distracting and it ran a little slow, So I decided to update it a little bit and move it to the right of the screen, I have an idea of making it horizontal and introduce some text hierarchy:

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Drop down items needs to appear a lot faster

Kyle said that the drop down menu items appear a little slower, so I added the Number of items and made them appear a lot faster.

Screen Recording 2026-02-27 at 11.45.09.mov

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Screen Recording 2026-02-27 at 11.49.18.mov

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Make the car disappear of the screen

Kyle said he want the car to actually drive off the screen, I had this idea before but was worried that it wouldn’t be taken very well, but Seeing that was some feedback, I decided to implement this feature

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I don’t like the Logo

This is feedback for myself but I really don’t like the logo, It just bothers me, I want to update it to better fit the design of the food service, I went for this California meets Five Guys style with it and I don’t think my logo meets that, so that’s what I went for

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Much better, I used the same typography throughout the design for the logo, then added a white outline.