Below is some feedback I got during my last class, I’m going to go through each point, talk about it and showed what I changed.
I was suggested to create an overview for the homepage, a section which highlights some of the main statistics for each slide, so I’m going to look through and see which data is worthy enough for the front, I do have an idea to do a summary, so instead of having the entire activity ring on the page, just include the best statistic and that’s it, I feel this would work better and would entice the viewer to scroll.
I started by changing the text bubble and making it wider and then adding some general statistics from the dashboard, Honestly It kind of sucks, I won’t lie. So I may experiment and see if there is a better way of representing data
Here it is better laid out, I just organised it so there would be two main data points and some general statistics from the week which I found to be the most interesting, I think it works a lot better and I’m happy with it.
I forgot to implement a title, I’m debating to change the position of the buttons to be lower to include a title or change the layout of the boxes, But I feel the first one will be easier and will work better.
I decided to put each title above the character, as I feel it just looks the best that way.
Honestly, I thought this feedback was weird, I felt the activity rings were too small, But I get what Kyle is saying about text size, there is no hierarchy and can be a little weird to read, so I may change it.
I just made the text bigger and yeah it looks better, Good bit of feedback for it.
This wasn’t even my feedback it was for someone else but it still applies unfortunately, I don’t know what I could except change it to tap but it would be weird, I think it is just something to keep in mind for the next project.